Need your help. I am trying to take a Patrick Henry and update to be relevant to today. I recorded this, please critique and help. If you can take this and make it into something, please do so. I am going to turn this into a video, but want your take on it prior to proceeding.
Don't hold back if its crap.
Put some patriotic music in the background, some pictures of real America, closed businesses, homeless folks, soup lines, Boston bombing Martial Law pic etc. etc. Then run with it.
Good stuff, I agree with McParland about some pics & music, or not. If you are going to re-do any of it, I would just edit out the stumbles that make it seem you are just reading the words, because the passion is definitely there