Help Needed

Need your help.  I am trying to take a Patrick Henry and update to be relevant to today.  I recorded this, please critique and help.  If you can take this and make it into something, please do so.  I am going to turn this into a video, but want your take on it prior to proceeding.

Don't hold back if its crap. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6LwUTCjIXts

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  • Well, lol, so much for that idea!
    • Put some patriotic music in the background, some pictures of real America, closed businesses, homeless folks, soup lines, Boston bombing Martial Law pic etc. etc. Then run with it.   

  • Good stuff, I agree with McParland about some pics & music, or not. If you are going to re-do any of it, I would just edit out the stumbles that make it seem you are just reading the words, because the passion is definitely there

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